Great rich, saturated colors Liz! You could use more dark and mid-range tones along the right side of the bulb to emphasize the form. Remember that roots in the back should be the darkest, mid-range lighter and the ones in the front will be the lightest. They should also have arc toning to convey their form. Remembering your light source I would add toning to the leaves in the “V” areas and parts of the leaves that would be in shadow because they are further back, etc. Nice job!
Great rich, saturated colors Liz! You could use more dark and mid-range tones along the right side of the bulb to emphasize the form. Remember that roots in the back should be the darkest, mid-range lighter and the ones in the front will be the lightest. They should also have arc toning to convey their form. Remembering your light source I would add toning to the leaves in the “V” areas and parts of the leaves that would be in shadow because they are further back, etc. Nice job!
I found this at the farmers market and just loved the shape. it was fun to draw. I am going to take your advice and continue to work on it.