Hi Heidi, This is a great first drawing! You have good control of toning and your sense of light on form is very developed. One thing to watch for is the white glow I’m seeing between the cherries in the cluster. There should be a sharper line to define the edge of the cherry. Make sure you keep that soft reflective light on the front cherry, but sharpen and darken where it goes into shadow.
Hi Heidi, This is a great first drawing! You have good control of toning and your sense of light on form is very developed. One thing to watch for is the white glow I’m seeing between the cherries in the cluster. There should be a sharper line to define the edge of the cherry. Make sure you keep that soft reflective light on the front cherry, but sharpen and darken where it goes into shadow.
I love the beautiful colors you got on these grapes. They also have a lovely translucent feel. Nice!