Great colors Theresia! I would suggest going in and give more dark toning to the underside of the leaf on the left below the fold. Also the right edge of the leaf on the right – I would expect that edge to be in a little shadow. Even though they are narrow, each root needs to have arc toning on it to convey that the roots are elongated cylinders. You obviously can’t do the whole range of 9 tones, but enough to emphasize their form. More dark toning on the right side of the bulb would help with it’s form too. Nice job!
Great colors Theresia! I would suggest going in and give more dark toning to the underside of the leaf on the left below the fold. Also the right edge of the leaf on the right – I would expect that edge to be in a little shadow. Even though they are narrow, each root needs to have arc toning on it to convey that the roots are elongated cylinders. You obviously can’t do the whole range of 9 tones, but enough to emphasize their form. More dark toning on the right side of the bulb would help with it’s form too. Nice job!
Ok. Thank you! I‘ll improve these parts.