This is looking good Marina! Nice toning and attention to detail! It is great seeing your actual subject. You can see that the reflected highlight is not as strong as your drawing. As I mentioned on another one of your posts I would add some color to the reflected highlight to tone it down. Also notice that the main highlight fades in and out of intensity and also follows the shape of the branch. โMessโ yours up a little. Your photo gives you a lot of information on how to do that. Really good job!!!!
07 January 2021
Beautiful attention to detail in the contours and edges of this branch!
This is looking good Marina! Nice toning and attention to detail! It is great seeing your actual subject. You can see that the reflected highlight is not as strong as your drawing. As I mentioned on another one of your posts I would add some color to the reflected highlight to tone it down. Also notice that the main highlight fades in and out of intensity and also follows the shape of the branch. โMessโ yours up a little. Your photo gives you a lot of information on how to do that. Really good job!!!!
Beautiful attention to detail in the contours and edges of this branch!
The others already covered the feedback here – so I can just say, good drawing – it’s fun to look at. ๐