These twigs just jump off the page! Good job! The only thing I would comment on is that there seems to be a white line between the cast shadow and the twig on the thickest, bottom one. If it is meant to be the reflective light, you should smooth the transition toward the deep twig shadow so it isn’t such a sharp line.
28 January 2021
This looks good, Marina! I’d also revisit your highlights a bit. Now, they read as white lines; you can “interrupt” them a little bit; “mess them up” with a light touch of that brown color so that they shimmer more. Beautiful dark tones and shadows!!
These twigs just jump off the page! Good job! The only thing I would comment on is that there seems to be a white line between the cast shadow and the twig on the thickest, bottom one. If it is meant to be the reflective light, you should smooth the transition toward the deep twig shadow so it isn’t such a sharp line.
This looks good, Marina! I’d also revisit your highlights a bit. Now, they read as white lines; you can “interrupt” them a little bit; “mess them up” with a light touch of that brown color so that they shimmer more. Beautiful dark tones and shadows!!