Hi Marina, Sweet drawing. Your use of color keeps getting better and better. I really like the subtle transition of color in the reds and yellows. And the cross section is sensitively done. Just the right tinge of browns! My two comments would be the reflective light should look less like a line and more like a glow. Think of that light bouncing off the table. Also the edge where the two apples overlap. Don’t be afraid to make that a strong, sharp edge. It looks a bit fuzzy now.
Hi Marina, Sweet drawing. Your use of color keeps getting better and better. I really like the subtle transition of color in the reds and yellows. And the cross section is sensitively done. Just the right tinge of browns! My two comments would be the reflective light should look less like a line and more like a glow. Think of that light bouncing off the table. Also the edge where the two apples overlap. Don’t be afraid to make that a strong, sharp edge. It looks a bit fuzzy now.
Thank you, Katy!