Hi Marina- I still see the reflected highlight as a thin, whitish line. I would add a little more color to it to tone it down and blend it in to the toning above it as you did on your pear.
Hi Marina, the sharper edge where the apples meet looks better! Good job. Now you need to think of the shape of that cast shadow. It seems to extended too far up on the left apple and would be darker directly under where the 2 apples meet. Observe, and think about light on form. I agree with Doug. the reflective light is still reading as a thin line. I’d take an eraser to it to lighten, then add tone to create a gradual tone down to the edge.
Reflected highlight adjusted.
Hi Marina- I still see the reflected highlight as a thin, whitish line. I would add a little more color to it to tone it down and blend it in to the toning above it as you did on your pear.
Hi Marina, the sharper edge where the apples meet looks better! Good job. Now you need to think of the shape of that cast shadow. It seems to extended too far up on the left apple and would be darker directly under where the 2 apples meet. Observe, and think about light on form. I agree with Doug. the reflective light is still reading as a thin line. I’d take an eraser to it to lighten, then add tone to create a gradual tone down to the edge.