I think I’ve got some things to work on here. Highlight lower? Top left looks like highlights, but they are yellow areas. Flat looking on the left? I put this fruit on top of a glass for a different view.
Could you send a photo of the peach. I sense you are trying to indicate the fuss with a “whitened out” color. It could work, but at this point, to me it looks like a flat pastel apple. I think you could add back some color and value to the left side.
I think I’ve got some things to work on here. Highlight lower? Top left looks like highlights, but they are yellow areas. Flat looking on the left? I put this fruit on top of a glass for a different view.
Yes, I’d move that highlight lower and to the left.
Could you send a photo of the peach. I sense you are trying to indicate the fuss with a “whitened out” color. It could work, but at this point, to me it looks like a flat pastel apple. I think you could add back some color and value to the left side.
I moved the highlight, did more toning and trying not to lose the fuzzy grey.