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Such an interesting drawing! Such an interesting plant! I had to look it up. And I can see your difficulty in drawing those silky threads of the seedpods. They would be a good candidate for work on Kraft paper!
You need to think of them more as threads. The pod behind them should be showing through in areas. They are reading as a solid shape now. Try to find places you can indicate their thread-like transparency by bringing in an indication of the pod behind them.