Hi Sheila, Fascinating subject and so challenging with all those intricate parts. You have really captured that lacy, spiky feel of the plant. My main suggestion would be that I’d like to see a bit more of the structure of the main flower. I love the sketchiness of the drawing overall, but my eye is drawn to that center flower and I want a bit more to look at. Could be it is an older flower and the individual elements are wilting and less defined, But as it appears in the foreground, I want those elements to me more in focus.
Hi Sheila, Fascinating subject and so challenging with all those intricate parts. You have really captured that lacy, spiky feel of the plant. My main suggestion would be that I’d like to see a bit more of the structure of the main flower. I love the sketchiness of the drawing overall, but my eye is drawn to that center flower and I want a bit more to look at. Could be it is an older flower and the individual elements are wilting and less defined, But as it appears in the foreground, I want those elements to me more in focus.
Lovely
Your muted lavender and green is so evocative.
Thanks, Maureen, Clare, and Katy. And, Katy, I’ll see what I can do from your helpful suggestions.