Great job Liz- beautiful colors and nice attention to the details on the flowers! You captured the delicacy of the petals! A couple of areas you could revisit. I think the flower bud would benefit from adding a highlight. The sepals on both flower and bud are all the same color and tone disregarding that part would be in the light and part would be in shadow (and in between)! The leaves are another area that are missing some toning and detail. You started to put some tonal range on the leaf on the left (the secondary veins are too wide), but the two on the right are all the same color and tone. You did such a great job on the flowers it would really help to bring the leaves up to the flower’s level!!! You are almost there!!!!
I love the toning on the big flower, so pretty.
Great job Liz- beautiful colors and nice attention to the details on the flowers! You captured the delicacy of the petals! A couple of areas you could revisit. I think the flower bud would benefit from adding a highlight. The sepals on both flower and bud are all the same color and tone disregarding that part would be in the light and part would be in shadow (and in between)! The leaves are another area that are missing some toning and detail. You started to put some tonal range on the leaf on the left (the secondary veins are too wide), but the two on the right are all the same color and tone. You did such a great job on the flowers it would really help to bring the leaves up to the flower’s level!!! You are almost there!!!!
Very helpful comments, I will work on this.