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I see you have lightened the shadows since the last submission. I think that was a good move. Now think about adding some color to the shadows. I believed I mentioned indigo. Also, the reflective light could be better placed. Even though, because of ambient light and translucency of the subject, you will see a dark edge next to the cast shadow, it is better to take that reflective light right to the edge. This way you will define the shape of the subject. It is a case of “Draw what you see, but also use what you have learned.”