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Hi Amelie- I think the stem and the well it emerges from looks really good! There should be a shadow cast on the apple from the stem, but I think that is all that area needs. The colors and the skin patterning are wonderful on the top half. The bottom looks like you combined the dark toning with the pattern and I don’t think it is as successful as the top half. The form toning would be smooth transitions from dark thru mid-range to light to emphasize the apple’s form. Then the skin pattern would go on top of that toning. Your reflected highlight looks great, but I would lighten the cast shadow. The shape is really good. It just needs to be a little lighter.