Hi Shelia, I like how you are adding in a bird, but I feel it is odd to be so small but in the center of the composition. If it felt to be in the distance I could see it being small. I also prefer your compositions when the center of the page is not the focal point because of the two separate pages, but having some lesser elements in the gutter. Is this glued down or can you change it around?
Hi Sheila- I guess because of the center vertical piece this really makes me think of the work you did in your book. I agree with Wendy about the bird. Because of strong larger leaves on the two sides I feel like it reads more as two pieces than a whole.
Ooooh I love the addition of the extra seed in that center-ish spot. And I really like the added ginkgo leaves. That one at the top helps the eye to swirl around the page. It’s looking great Sheila. I like how they work as separate pages, but how they still interact with each other and are balanced as a whole. Very nicely done.
Hi Shelia, I like how you are adding in a bird, but I feel it is odd to be so small but in the center of the composition. If it felt to be in the distance I could see it being small. I also prefer your compositions when the center of the page is not the focal point because of the two separate pages, but having some lesser elements in the gutter. Is this glued down or can you change it around?
Hi Sheila- I guess because of the center vertical piece this really makes me think of the work you did in your book. I agree with Wendy about the bird. Because of strong larger leaves on the two sides I feel like it reads more as two pieces than a whole.
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Ooooh I love the addition of the extra seed in that center-ish spot. And I really like the added ginkgo leaves. That one at the top helps the eye to swirl around the page. It’s looking great Sheila. I like how they work as separate pages, but how they still interact with each other and are balanced as a whole. Very nicely done.