Wow!!! These berries are amazing Rita!!! Take another look at the upper, left leaf. The main vein on the top of the leaf should line up with the main vein visible on the bottom of the leaf. Nice job!!!
Rita, those berries! They are just popping right off the page. Love them. If you can do a little erasing, you could maybe tilt that center vein on the underside up a bit so that it continues to where you can see it on the top side. And then I’m just wondering where the berry that is on the far right attaches to the plant. Minor nit-picky stuff, because this is just gorgeous.
@pam @dougMilne Unfortunately I cant be on the webinar monday but wanted to say that for the berries I used red ball point pen as my grasaille layer- I did that on the apple I”d done a while back too- and then colored pencil on top- it makes things super saturated- on the leaf, do you think i could just get rid of the line to a point furhter down on the upper leaf? – that was actually more how it actually looked but somehow I felt like it didnt look right without continuing the vein?
Wow!!! These berries are amazing Rita!!! Take another look at the upper, left leaf. The main vein on the top of the leaf should line up with the main vein visible on the bottom of the leaf. Nice job!!!
Rita, those berries! They are just popping right off the page. Love them. If you can do a little erasing, you could maybe tilt that center vein on the underside up a bit so that it continues to where you can see it on the top side. And then I’m just wondering where the berry that is on the far right attaches to the plant. Minor nit-picky stuff, because this is just gorgeous.
@pam @dougMilne Unfortunately I cant be on the webinar monday but wanted to say that for the berries I used red ball point pen as my grasaille layer- I did that on the apple I”d done a while back too- and then colored pencil on top- it makes things super saturated- on the leaf, do you think i could just get rid of the line to a point furhter down on the upper leaf? – that was actually more how it actually looked but somehow I felt like it didnt look right without continuing the vein?