Hi Mary- This version has more form than the original. I would add more dark toning on the right side and bottom of the 1/2 round area as that would be in shadow. This would also emphasize it’s form. Also take a look at the stem. There is minimal range of tones and both sides have the same values.
Hi Mary- This version has more form than the original. I would add more dark toning on the right side and bottom of the 1/2 round area as that would be in shadow. This would also emphasize it’s form. Also take a look at the stem. There is minimal range of tones and both sides have the same values.