Welcome to the ArtFeed Faye! Good job on these berries! The rendering is nice as are the colors! My one comment would be consistency. A couple of the red berries could use more tonal range to enhance their form and a number are missing a highlight. Same goes for the blue berries. Pay attention to the placement of the highlights as some are not where I would expect them to be. You are off to a good start!
Welcome to the ArtFeed Faye! Good job on these berries! The rendering is nice as are the colors! My one comment would be consistency. A couple of the red berries could use more tonal range to enhance their form and a number are missing a highlight. Same goes for the blue berries. Pay attention to the placement of the highlights as some are not where I would expect them to be. You are off to a good start!