Wonderful colors Faye! There are a couple of areas to revisit. You could add more shadow toning where leaves overlap. The berries also need highlights and a range of dark toning. I see that the berries that are behind are slightly more saturated, but it is subtle. Because there are no highlights or range of tones the berries are too similar and in need of definition and form. Remember that the shinier the surface of a subject, the whiter the highlight should be.
Wonderful colors Faye! There are a couple of areas to revisit. You could add more shadow toning where leaves overlap. The berries also need highlights and a range of dark toning. I see that the berries that are behind are slightly more saturated, but it is subtle. Because there are no highlights or range of tones the berries are too similar and in need of definition and form. Remember that the shinier the surface of a subject, the whiter the highlight should be.