Hi Deborah, Such a beautiful drawing! You have really captured the delicate cacophony of petals!
30 October 2020
Wow, Deborah! You drew this flower very well: the petals are radiating from the center, and sit well in perspective. Beautiful, delicate shading of these petals!! Great job getting those really dark darks in the center near the stamens. Is your light source coming from the right? Those petals at the top right could maybe use a little more definition, so we’re not seeing as many outlines. You could also darken a bit more where the stem meets the flower, to emphasize that overlap. Really great work.
Hi Deborah, Such a beautiful drawing! You have really captured the delicate cacophony of petals!
Wow, Deborah! You drew this flower very well: the petals are radiating from the center, and sit well in perspective. Beautiful, delicate shading of these petals!! Great job getting those really dark darks in the center near the stamens. Is your light source coming from the right? Those petals at the top right could maybe use a little more definition, so we’re not seeing as many outlines. You could also darken a bit more where the stem meets the flower, to emphasize that overlap. Really great work.
Thank you for comments and suggestions!