This is a good rendering with a nice variety of colors. Some areas (bottom left corner) are not as crisp as they could be. Verithin pencils would help sharpen all of the edges and I would also add more dark toning to enhance the twigs cylindrical shape. The highlight on the horizontal twig seems too straight and would benefit from breaks and variation as you started to do on the other twigs.
05 December 2019
April, I agree with Doug here; work on those highlights and saturate your color a bit more: build a few more layers of color so that we really feel that full range of tones from dark to light. Great work!
This is a good rendering with a nice variety of colors. Some areas (bottom left corner) are not as crisp as they could be. Verithin pencils would help sharpen all of the edges and I would also add more dark toning to enhance the twigs cylindrical shape. The highlight on the horizontal twig seems too straight and would benefit from breaks and variation as you started to do on the other twigs.
April, I agree with Doug here; work on those highlights and saturate your color a bit more: build a few more layers of color so that we really feel that full range of tones from dark to light. Great work!
Thank you for the critique! I will keep working on it.