I would darken a bit at the overlapping areas for more separation between the forms in front and behind. Then I would look at the comment I made on your lemon shadow and do that here as well. Important to remind yourself over and over again that a shadow is not a shape. It is a shadow and should feel subtle and ghost like!
I would darken a bit at the overlapping areas for more separation between the forms in front and behind. Then I would look at the comment I made on your lemon shadow and do that here as well. Important to remind yourself over and over again that a shadow is not a shape. It is a shadow and should feel subtle and ghost like!