Hey Elizabeth, I love that you are being bold with your colors! However, I think your darkest shadow color is too black. You could use that color for the shadow directly under the apple. I’d use a burgundy or maroon for the darker areas on the apple. And though I love the yellow tone you have in the highlight area, I’d like to see you leave the white of the paper for the very lightest point. Again more control with your toning will help you get that nice round shape. I can see improvement in that area in the smaller apple at the bottom of the page. Good job.
Hey Elizabeth, I love that you are being bold with your colors! However, I think your darkest shadow color is too black. You could use that color for the shadow directly under the apple. I’d use a burgundy or maroon for the darker areas on the apple. And though I love the yellow tone you have in the highlight area, I’d like to see you leave the white of the paper for the very lightest point. Again more control with your toning will help you get that nice round shape. I can see improvement in that area in the smaller apple at the bottom of the page. Good job.
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