Hi Ingrid, I see you took Doug’s advice. Looks great! So much more depth and value range. Now I’d like to see more of a sense of light source. Think of the direction of the light. It should come from the upper left over your shoulder, if you are right handed (and upper right if you are left handed.) That cast shadow of the stem on the leaf would be more on one side than the other.
Hi Ingrid, I see you took Doug’s advice. Looks great! So much more depth and value range. Now I’d like to see more of a sense of light source. Think of the direction of the light. It should come from the upper left over your shoulder, if you are right handed (and upper right if you are left handed.) That cast shadow of the stem on the leaf would be more on one side than the other.
@katylyness thanks a lot Katy! Oh yes, I can see what you mean, going to work on it!