Hi Cathie. Good start. Great page! On the fruit give us a good circular highlight in the left upper quadrant if you are right handed and lighting from the left. Maybe the stems are too thick? I think they’d have some variety of thickness. Roots – looks like you are getting the idea to me. Plaid: Where you are maybe leaving a reflective highlight on the right of that first cylinder looks like a “bulging out,” so re-examine that area.
Hi Cathie. Good start. Great page! On the fruit give us a good circular highlight in the left upper quadrant if you are right handed and lighting from the left. Maybe the stems are too thick? I think they’d have some variety of thickness. Roots – looks like you are getting the idea to me. Plaid: Where you are maybe leaving a reflective highlight on the right of that first cylinder looks like a “bulging out,” so re-examine that area.
Thank you so much for your valuable feedback. I do find the highlighting challenging so will keep practicing.