Hi Carol-I really like how you have shown different views of the flowers in addition to many stages of development. It is a very informative and beautiful page. My eye keeps going to the area between the bulb and the bunch of flowers/leaves and I would consider adding a detail there for composition sake. Other than that it looks like you are ready to tackle the color pencil stage. It is looking great so far!
19 February 2020
Carol, this is looking great! I agree with Doug that maybe something could go in that space… a flower cross section perhaps? Or a split-open corolla? I think the bulb could use some more saturation and refined texture in colored pencil. The yellows of the flowers are bright, saturated, and lovely. Nice work!!!
Lots of mini flowers blooming from one bulb! Many little heads knocking into each other 😁 suggestions for improvement…..
Hi Carol-I really like how you have shown different views of the flowers in addition to many stages of development. It is a very informative and beautiful page. My eye keeps going to the area between the bulb and the bunch of flowers/leaves and I would consider adding a detail there for composition sake. Other than that it looks like you are ready to tackle the color pencil stage. It is looking great so far!
Carol, this is looking great! I agree with Doug that maybe something could go in that space… a flower cross section perhaps? Or a split-open corolla? I think the bulb could use some more saturation and refined texture in colored pencil. The yellows of the flowers are bright, saturated, and lovely. Nice work!!!