Wonderful colors Helene! I feel like it needs some sort of representation of leaves on the left side of the stem. I know you were drawing what you saw, but in the future try to avoid parts lining up. I am referring to how the bottom petals on the flower (on the right) lines up with the bottom of the leaf to it’s left. It would have been better for that leaf to be shorter than the flower petals or not even there. In some cases making one of the objects longer is also an option. Easier to add to something than trying to erase it. I don’t know that adding to the length of either the leaf or petals would work in this case.
This azalea was amazing with its different hues of orange and pink on the same flower.
Wonderful colors Helene! I feel like it needs some sort of representation of leaves on the left side of the stem. I know you were drawing what you saw, but in the future try to avoid parts lining up. I am referring to how the bottom petals on the flower (on the right) lines up with the bottom of the leaf to it’s left. It would have been better for that leaf to be shorter than the flower petals or not even there. In some cases making one of the objects longer is also an option. Easier to add to something than trying to erase it. I don’t know that adding to the length of either the leaf or petals would work in this case.