Hi Helene! Beautiful colors and textures! I would suggest adding a range of dark toning along the right side and bottoms of both pomegranates to emphasize their form (especially the red one). I would also add cast shadows to help ground the subjects. The cast shadow where the two pomegranates meet is well done and calls for it to be on the rest of the drawing.
Lovely, Helene. You nailed that translucency of the membrane that is covering some of the seeds. The skin is gorgeous with fantastic highlights. I like that little bit of highlight that is at the base of the calyx of the red pomegranate. Really well done. I agree with Doug. Cast shadows & a little more toning on the whole fruits will complete this.
Hi Helene! Beautiful colors and textures! I would suggest adding a range of dark toning along the right side and bottoms of both pomegranates to emphasize their form (especially the red one). I would also add cast shadows to help ground the subjects. The cast shadow where the two pomegranates meet is well done and calls for it to be on the rest of the drawing.
Lovely, Helene. You nailed that translucency of the membrane that is covering some of the seeds. The skin is gorgeous with fantastic highlights. I like that little bit of highlight that is at the base of the calyx of the red pomegranate. Really well done. I agree with Doug. Cast shadows & a little more toning on the whole fruits will complete this.