Hi Helene! This is wonderful. The view of the tulip on the right is hard to do, but wow, you nailed it! It is sharp and crisp and it does not want me to look anywhere else. The tulip on the left looks more muted so the balance of the composition is off for me. I would also take another look at the toning on the leaves. You have a nice dark shadow on the leaf next to the stem of the left tulip, but those dark shadows are missing from other parts where I would expect to see them. It would be easier to address it at the monthly webinar. You just need a couple of tweaks that I think will make a big difference.
Hi Doug, thank you for your comments and I will join you for the webinar. I sent this on the art feed because I couldn’t no longer ´see ´ the drawing and was stuck..
Love seeing these.
Hi Helene! This is wonderful. The view of the tulip on the right is hard to do, but wow, you nailed it! It is sharp and crisp and it does not want me to look anywhere else. The tulip on the left looks more muted so the balance of the composition is off for me. I would also take another look at the toning on the leaves. You have a nice dark shadow on the leaf next to the stem of the left tulip, but those dark shadows are missing from other parts where I would expect to see them. It would be easier to address it at the monthly webinar. You just need a couple of tweaks that I think will make a big difference.
Hi Doug, thank you for your comments and I will join you for the webinar. I sent this on the art feed because I couldn’t no longer ´see ´ the drawing and was stuck..