Another beauty Chrystel! You are off to a great start! Once again your color selection and saturation are very well done! Tomatoes can be so shiny and your highlight makes this one look shiny, but I feel like there would be more highlights. For example on the curved tops of the sections. The left side needs more dark toning to emphasize the form of the tomato. It will be tricky because the skin color is darker there, but that and the strong white vein are making the left side look flat. I am confused by the bright white spot on the right edge. If it is a reflected light it should not be as bright as the main highlight and I would add color to it to tone it down. A little darker toning on the bottom in addition to the darker toning I recommended for the left side will improve the tomato’s form. You are almost there!
really beautiful
Another beauty Chrystel! You are off to a great start! Once again your color selection and saturation are very well done! Tomatoes can be so shiny and your highlight makes this one look shiny, but I feel like there would be more highlights. For example on the curved tops of the sections. The left side needs more dark toning to emphasize the form of the tomato. It will be tricky because the skin color is darker there, but that and the strong white vein are making the left side look flat. I am confused by the bright white spot on the right edge. If it is a reflected light it should not be as bright as the main highlight and I would add color to it to tone it down. A little darker toning on the bottom in addition to the darker toning I recommended for the left side will improve the tomato’s form. You are almost there!
Bonjour, c’est mon deuxième travail. Effectivement j’ai réalisé que j’ai un peu exagérer à certains endroits. Donc merci pour vos conseils.