Wow Cathie!!! You definitely rose to the challenge!!!! You have achieved all those great details and the form is so much better! I think you need to have a highlight where there was one on the original drawing and I would also add some more dark tones on the right side of the bulb to emphasize the form even more. Also more dark toning where the bulb meets the roots and on some of the roots to delineate them more. The roots look like they are outlined rather than toned to show their form. Really impressed with what you accomplished on this drawing!!!!!
Thanks Vern for suggesting a lighter version ! It was an interesting challenge – I am trying to work on my drawing and toning.
Wow Cathie!!! You definitely rose to the challenge!!!! You have achieved all those great details and the form is so much better! I think you need to have a highlight where there was one on the original drawing and I would also add some more dark tones on the right side of the bulb to emphasize the form even more. Also more dark toning where the bulb meets the roots and on some of the roots to delineate them more. The roots look like they are outlined rather than toned to show their form. Really impressed with what you accomplished on this drawing!!!!!
Yes!!! Awesome work Cathie!