Hi Camille, Lovely drawing. We both love the clementine! I love how you have rendered the peel on the right side. I really feel its texture and thickness. Also the glow of the translucent fruit is beautiful! the one comment I would have concerns the shadows. I think you will find there should be more of a shadow where the peel overlaps the fruit on the left side. Not a lot, since there is a bit of reflective glow, but especially in the little triangles where the darkest shadow would be. As it is, the cast shadow on the table is over powering the drawing.
Hi Camille, I really love this drawing. It has a lovely orange glow and I like how it turns and opens up towards something. It’s an inviting and dynamic composition.
Hi Camille, Lovely drawing. We both love the clementine! I love how you have rendered the peel on the right side. I really feel its texture and thickness. Also the glow of the translucent fruit is beautiful! the one comment I would have concerns the shadows. I think you will find there should be more of a shadow where the peel overlaps the fruit on the left side. Not a lot, since there is a bit of reflective glow, but especially in the little triangles where the darkest shadow would be. As it is, the cast shadow on the table is over powering the drawing.
Hi Camille, I really love this drawing. It has a lovely orange glow and I like how it turns and opens up towards something. It’s an inviting and dynamic composition.