I love the saturation and brightness of these oranges! I think you did a nice job with the “puckered” texture at the top where the stem was. The cast shadow is a little overpowering, I think, though… I think you could make it a little less important by toning it down a bit and let it fade into the paper so there is not a clear edge to the shadow. Shadows can have tonal gradients, too; the cast shadow can be darkest where it touches the subject and then gradually fade to the white of the paper. (Just curious: Are you using a textured paper? A smoother paper may make those tonal transitions a bit easier.)
I love the saturation and brightness of these oranges! I think you did a nice job with the “puckered” texture at the top where the stem was. The cast shadow is a little overpowering, I think, though… I think you could make it a little less important by toning it down a bit and let it fade into the paper so there is not a clear edge to the shadow. Shadows can have tonal gradients, too; the cast shadow can be darkest where it touches the subject and then gradually fade to the white of the paper. (Just curious: Are you using a textured paper? A smoother paper may make those tonal transitions a bit easier.)