I LOVE this view! It’s very dramatic, and I just love seeing the outer skin of this melon at the same time as the seedy center. Love the way it’s cut. Nice, shiny highlight, and good toning in the place where you cut it. Again, I think your cast shadow could be worked a little more, so that it has a tonal gradient. The color pattern is nicely applied along the contours of the fruit. I think you could pump up the shadow side of the fruit as well, to really show us the roundness of this form. Great work!
Hi Collins, this is Sam, the new instructor, jumping into the art feed for some commenting. Please feel free to let me know what is helpful for you in terms of feedback. Your drawings look beautiful and all have great character. I’ll look forward to seeing more.
I LOVE this view! It’s very dramatic, and I just love seeing the outer skin of this melon at the same time as the seedy center. Love the way it’s cut. Nice, shiny highlight, and good toning in the place where you cut it. Again, I think your cast shadow could be worked a little more, so that it has a tonal gradient. The color pattern is nicely applied along the contours of the fruit. I think you could pump up the shadow side of the fruit as well, to really show us the roundness of this form. Great work!
Hi Collins, this is Sam, the new instructor, jumping into the art feed for some commenting. Please feel free to let me know what is helpful for you in terms of feedback. Your drawings look beautiful and all have great character. I’ll look forward to seeing more.