Nice drawing and colours, Collins. You’ve done a nice job with warms and cools. Makes it vibrant. The composition of the 2 plums in front leads my eye on a nice curve to the interior of the cut section. Am I looking at the pit or the pit where the pit was? 😉 You could define that a bit better for me. The shape of the lower curve of the central plum needs to be adjusted I think. That will also help with that white diamond shape of the paper in between the plums’ 2 cast shadows, that my eye gets stuck on. Also, the dark shadow/well on the foremost plum needs some clarification as well.
Nice drawing and colours, Collins. You’ve done a nice job with warms and cools. Makes it vibrant. The composition of the 2 plums in front leads my eye on a nice curve to the interior of the cut section. Am I looking at the pit or the pit where the pit was? 😉 You could define that a bit better for me. The shape of the lower curve of the central plum needs to be adjusted I think. That will also help with that white diamond shape of the paper in between the plums’ 2 cast shadows, that my eye gets stuck on. Also, the dark shadow/well on the foremost plum needs some clarification as well.