This is gorgeous Colleen! The colors and your toning are great!!!!! The negative space between the orange and the leaf on the right bothers me. I would get rid of that negative space by making it part of the leaf. I also find the cast shadow off putting. It does not represent the shape of the orange or the angle created by the light source. Personally I don’t think it needs a shadow. Maybe lighten it some. This is a very striking drawing!!!! Great job!!!!
11 February 2021
Agree; lovely saturation of color and compelling view!
This is gorgeous Colleen! The colors and your toning are great!!!!! The negative space between the orange and the leaf on the right bothers me. I would get rid of that negative space by making it part of the leaf. I also find the cast shadow off putting. It does not represent the shape of the orange or the angle created by the light source. Personally I don’t think it needs a shadow. Maybe lighten it some. This is a very striking drawing!!!! Great job!!!!
Agree; lovely saturation of color and compelling view!
Lovely composition and rendering