Nice rich colors Colleen! You could have more range of darker tones on the right side of the intact view and also on the skin of the cut view. If possible to move, the highlight should be positioned over to the right a little more. The seeds in the cut view look wonderful! Were you thinking of adding anything else? The composition needs something on the right side.
I like this drawing very much, Colleen, Of course Doug already commented on the Botanical Drawing ways to improve it – but just a note here to let you know I love it as is too. It has a wonderful, enjoyable quality to it.
Nice rich colors Colleen! You could have more range of darker tones on the right side of the intact view and also on the skin of the cut view. If possible to move, the highlight should be positioned over to the right a little more. The seeds in the cut view look wonderful! Were you thinking of adding anything else? The composition needs something on the right side.
I like this drawing very much, Colleen, Of course Doug already commented on the Botanical Drawing ways to improve it – but just a note here to let you know I love it as is too. It has a wonderful, enjoyable quality to it.