Nice job Constance! As usual, you have nice toning and a good range of tones! On the cast shadows you could have more transition from the very dark, (closest to the fruit) getting lighter as it moves away. Because there is no transition of tone the darker toning looks more like an outline. The highlight on the upper fruits could be whiter to convey the shiny surface.
15 July 2021
Nice work, Constance! I really enjoy the couple of fruits on the left. Beautiful details showing the “segmenting” of the fruit, with that subtle “seam” that crosses through the middle. And I really like the cast shadow that the far left fruit casts on the one it is leaning against. Very nice contrast there.
Nice job Constance! As usual, you have nice toning and a good range of tones! On the cast shadows you could have more transition from the very dark, (closest to the fruit) getting lighter as it moves away. Because there is no transition of tone the darker toning looks more like an outline. The highlight on the upper fruits could be whiter to convey the shiny surface.
Nice work, Constance! I really enjoy the couple of fruits on the left. Beautiful details showing the “segmenting” of the fruit, with that subtle “seam” that crosses through the middle. And I really like the cast shadow that the far left fruit casts on the one it is leaning against. Very nice contrast there.