You did a great job capturing the frost Denise and this was a great subject for the Kraft paper! The one thing I am struggling with is the form toning. The flower is missing it’s full form impact because there is no light side or dark side. It will be tricky because you don’t want to eliminate where the frost is on the right side. I would add some darker toning (using darker color of that area of the petal – not dark sepia) on the right side of the curled up part of the petal on the right because the curled up part of the petal would be casting a shadow. I think the very right edge could go a little darker too. Maybe those two things would also help emphasizing the form and it would also help the long petal on the right stand out more.
You did a great job capturing the frost Denise and this was a great subject for the Kraft paper! The one thing I am struggling with is the form toning. The flower is missing it’s full form impact because there is no light side or dark side. It will be tricky because you don’t want to eliminate where the frost is on the right side. I would add some darker toning (using darker color of that area of the petal – not dark sepia) on the right side of the curled up part of the petal on the right because the curled up part of the petal would be casting a shadow. I think the very right edge could go a little darker too. Maybe those two things would also help emphasizing the form and it would also help the long petal on the right stand out more.