Hi Denise- the blue/purple color of the petals is beautiful! A very hard color to capture successfully. The seed head needs some highlights to give both the individual seeds and the whole head some form. Even dark colored subjects need highlights on them. The leaf is hard for me to read. There is a white line that cuts the leaf in half and I am not sure if it is a vein or a leaf edge. It seems like the underside of the leaf is a more minty color and the topside is a darker color. I would play that up more so there is more contrast between the top and bottom of the leaf, which will also make it easier to read. Really nice study page!
Hi Denise- the blue/purple color of the petals is beautiful! A very hard color to capture successfully. The seed head needs some highlights to give both the individual seeds and the whole head some form. Even dark colored subjects need highlights on them. The leaf is hard for me to read. There is a white line that cuts the leaf in half and I am not sure if it is a vein or a leaf edge. It seems like the underside of the leaf is a more minty color and the topside is a darker color. I would play that up more so there is more contrast between the top and bottom of the leaf, which will also make it easier to read. Really nice study page!