Hi Diane, I really like your textures on this apple! And your apple is starting to feel spherical. The one thing I notice that you need to work on is the reflective light and cast shadow. There should not be a white line between the ground and apple. In fact that area on the ground should be the darkest spot on the drawing. It is where the light is most fully blocked. The reflective light should be on the apple itself and will be about a 4 on the value scale. Think about the concept of light on form. And observe carefully.
Hi Diane, I really like your textures on this apple! And your apple is starting to feel spherical. The one thing I notice that you need to work on is the reflective light and cast shadow. There should not be a white line between the ground and apple. In fact that area on the ground should be the darkest spot on the drawing. It is where the light is most fully blocked. The reflective light should be on the apple itself and will be about a 4 on the value scale. Think about the concept of light on form. And observe carefully.