Great job Denise! You achieved a great range of tones on the value scale lesson. The arc tone cylinder is almost there. The left side of the highlight is too uniform. The tone should get lighter as it moves toward the highlight. I see you numbered the different tones on the bottom of the cylinder, but overall I am not seeing that range of tones reflected on the actual cylinder. With the thin cylinder and the stick the mid-range tones are too similar. The dark right edge should not be a distinct line. It should seamlessly transition from one tone to the next getting lighter as it moves toward the highlight as you did on the wider cylinder. Small changes and you will be there!
Great job Denise! You achieved a great range of tones on the value scale lesson. The arc tone cylinder is almost there. The left side of the highlight is too uniform. The tone should get lighter as it moves toward the highlight. I see you numbered the different tones on the bottom of the cylinder, but overall I am not seeing that range of tones reflected on the actual cylinder. With the thin cylinder and the stick the mid-range tones are too similar. The dark right edge should not be a distinct line. It should seamlessly transition from one tone to the next getting lighter as it moves toward the highlight as you did on the wider cylinder. Small changes and you will be there!