Lovely drawing! Compositionally, it has a nice flow. I really like the way you have used the darkest areas. For example the little stems/petoles and the deep shadow on the petals of the right flower. I’d like to see a bit more sense of “light of form”. For example, I’d like to more feel the shape of the sepals. The left flower seems unfinished. compared tho the right one. I’m confused on what is happening where the petals meet the flower. Nice work on the fuzzy stem!
The pencil work made a big difference Dora. The petals on the left now have as much depth and visual strength as the ones on the right. Love the colors! Great job!!!! Welcome back!!!!!
Looking great! There are some dark spots that I think could be feathered into the petals just a bit. Especially at the base of the blueish purple petal. You’ve done such a nice job with this.
Lovely drawing! Compositionally, it has a nice flow. I really like the way you have used the darkest areas. For example the little stems/petoles and the deep shadow on the petals of the right flower. I’d like to see a bit more sense of “light of form”. For example, I’d like to more feel the shape of the sepals. The left flower seems unfinished. compared tho the right one. I’m confused on what is happening where the petals meet the flower. Nice work on the fuzzy stem!
I’ve added some pencil. Initially I only did it in watercolour. I was very much out of practice so wanted to give it a go.
It’s on 3 inch by 4 inch for a small frame. This photo taken when in glass frame.
The pencil work made a big difference Dora. The petals on the left now have as much depth and visual strength as the ones on the right. Love the colors! Great job!!!! Welcome back!!!!!
Looking great! There are some dark spots that I think could be feathered into the petals just a bit. Especially at the base of the blueish purple petal. You’ve done such a nice job with this.