Hi Douglass, Nice toning on the beet! I like its smoothness. It’s very pleasing. What I’d really like to see now is more attention to the details of the leaves. I think the contrast of the simplicity of the vegetable with more a complex study of the leaves would be compelling. I’d also add more colors to the leaves. Keep them predominately green, but with some other hues. Maybe work in some of that orange?
Hi Douglass, Nice toning on the beet! I like its smoothness. It’s very pleasing. What I’d really like to see now is more attention to the details of the leaves. I think the contrast of the simplicity of the vegetable with more a complex study of the leaves would be compelling. I’d also add more colors to the leaves. Keep them predominately green, but with some other hues. Maybe work in some of that orange?
We love this drawing Douglass! Way to go – I also like Katy’s suggestions.