The toning on the body and along the right edge of the cap has helped. I am still missing the cap details that show that there are four sections to the cap. I would lighten the cast shadow a little and if you are going to have a cast shadow I would expect to see a reflected highlight on the persimmon.
Hi Douglass- I can’t find the message you sent out yesterday, but I did a quick sketch of the sepal cap to show you what I meant about the four sections of the cap I am seeing in your picture. Hope this helps!
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The toning on the body and along the right edge of the cap has helped. I am still missing the cap details that show that there are four sections to the cap. I would lighten the cast shadow a little and if you are going to have a cast shadow I would expect to see a reflected highlight on the persimmon.
Hi Douglass- I can’t find the message you sent out yesterday, but I did a quick sketch of the sepal cap to show you what I meant about the four sections of the cap I am seeing in your picture. Hope this helps!