Hi Douglass- this new image does look better, but I think you could push it even more! Look at those “V” areas where petals meet to add more dark toning and also where upper petals would cast shadows on the leaves below. I would work on the highlights also. I would expect to see more highlights especially on the side closest to the light source.
Hi Douglass- this new image does look better, but I think you could push it even more! Look at those “V” areas where petals meet to add more dark toning and also where upper petals would cast shadows on the leaves below. I would work on the highlights also. I would expect to see more highlights especially on the side closest to the light source.