Hi Cibyl- you have chosen a great subject and I like how you have positioned it on the page! As I mentioned on one of your pear drawings, the shadows are too dark. They are distracting the eye from what is your focal point instead of supporting it. When I first started drawing the only time I had to draw was at night and I soon realized that the shadows on my subjects were much stronger at night. I had to think of how they should be rather than draw what I was seeing. It took me a while, but now it is second nature.
Hi Cibyl- you have chosen a great subject and I like how you have positioned it on the page! As I mentioned on one of your pear drawings, the shadows are too dark. They are distracting the eye from what is your focal point instead of supporting it. When I first started drawing the only time I had to draw was at night and I soon realized that the shadows on my subjects were much stronger at night. I had to think of how they should be rather than draw what I was seeing. It took me a while, but now it is second nature.
thank you! this is very helpful!