Hi Liz- Nice job on the primroses! Those leaves are a challenge! What stands out to me is the lack of toning. The underside of leaves, where leaves cross and also in the wells of the flowers plus where petals overlap are some areas I would expect to see ranges of toning. I think adding that will bring this drawing to the next level! P.S. I would have the center veins get thinner as they head to the end.
Hi Liz- Nice job on the primroses! Those leaves are a challenge! What stands out to me is the lack of toning. The underside of leaves, where leaves cross and also in the wells of the flowers plus where petals overlap are some areas I would expect to see ranges of toning. I think adding that will bring this drawing to the next level! P.S. I would have the center veins get thinner as they head to the end.