Hi Lesley- the arc tone bar in color is very well done and has a nice range of tones! You are off to a good start with the branch. The left side looks too much like an outline and I would lighten it a little. It is also redder in color than the rest of the branch and throws it off. The toning to the right of the highlight looks very uniform. It lacks the range you so successfully did on the arc tone bar and as I mentioned does not have the reddish color on the left. You are almost there!!!
Hi Lesley- the arc tone bar in color is very well done and has a nice range of tones! You are off to a good start with the branch. The left side looks too much like an outline and I would lighten it a little. It is also redder in color than the rest of the branch and throws it off. The toning to the right of the highlight looks very uniform. It lacks the range you so successfully did on the arc tone bar and as I mentioned does not have the reddish color on the left. You are almost there!!!