Hi Lesley- the texture of the rind on the unpeeled orange is great!!!!! I feel like I would like to see some texture on the half peeled rind. The fruit segments look juicy! The flower could use some toning on the petal overlaps some appropriate shading in the well. Nice job!!!!
Hi Lesley- the texture of the rind on the unpeeled orange is great!!!!! I feel like I would like to see some texture on the half peeled rind. The fruit segments look juicy! The flower could use some toning on the petal overlaps some appropriate shading in the well. Nice job!!!!
Hi Doug, I have reworked the drawing and added a darker shadow line too. Hope the flower is not overdone now!!