Hi Emily! You are off to a good start! You need to have more of a range of tones. Refer back to the tone bar exercise you did with the 9 tones. There is too much of a mid-range tone. Add to the dark toning you have on the right side and transition lighter as you move left. I am missing a highlight and adding that and the range of tones will give your sphere great form!
Hi Emily! You are off to a good start! You need to have more of a range of tones. Refer back to the tone bar exercise you did with the 9 tones. There is too much of a mid-range tone. Add to the dark toning you have on the right side and transition lighter as you move left. I am missing a highlight and adding that and the range of tones will give your sphere great form!
Nice to see you continuing through the lessons, Emily!